Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantage of the development outweighs its disadvantage?
Recently, the issue of working abroad has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that although there are some disadvantages to taking up overseas job offers and moving to a foreign country with family members, these are outweighed by the advantages, while others argue otherwise. And I wholeheartedly agree with the former stand. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, those who claim that dwelling abroad with families because of overseas employment exerts a detrimental influence on them as well as their mother country do so for several reasons. Proponents of this argument insist that people might lack a sense of belonging and feel rootless given that they are often uprooted from their acquaintances, which can even lead them to experience high levels of stress. In addition, their home country could suffer from brain drain that prevents the country from flourishing. If a multitude of its talented citizens decide to emigrate, the speed of political and economic progress will be slowed.
My opinion, however, is that the benefits of this trend are more significant. Perhaps the most compelling reason is that not only can working parents' children develop language skills, but they are also able to broaden perspectives. This means that being exposed to an environment where a second language is spoken makes it possible for children to learn a language other than their mother tongue and to have a deeper understanding of other cultures, affecting their studies and future careers in a positive way. Furthermore, in compensation for overseas postings, a large number of international companies have a predisposition to provide many perks to employees in a foreign country. To be more specific, they often receive free accommodation, tuition fee waivers, and lucrative pension schemes, which allows them to have an improved standard of living. In light of the above, I find these more persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that the benefits of residing in an overseas nation in order to be employed surpass the drawbacks for the reasons discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85682768818 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.245091596 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6875 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234320365128 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586781810586 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564375880084 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103341507751 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725389412088 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.