Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, whether advertisements are advantageous or not has become a fiercely controversial issue. Some people assert that advertisements exert positive economic influences on society, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I believe that both arguments should be given equal weight. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, it seems difficult to refute the idea that the industry of advertising contributes to the development of society. Perhaps the most compelling reason is that advertising often leads to economic growth since it allows people to obtain more employment opportunities. In addition, advertising is related to a myriad of industries, such as entertainment and arts. Thus, the value of the advertising industry is considered priceless and it plays an important role in nations' economy. To exemplify, one recent study conducted by a university in New York illustrates that the advertising industry accounted for approximately 15% of the gross regional domestic product of New York in 2018 and researchers expected this figure to continually increase. For these reasons, there does seem to be a solid basis for the claim that advertisements have a number of benefits of economy.
On the other hand, it seems short-sighted to contend that advertisements merely brings with it positives. The most oft-cited argument against such a view is that the price of products maded by companies is more likely to go up because a multitude of businesses have to invest vast sums of money in advertisements to compete with other companies. This phenomenon place financial burdens on consumers. As a brief illustration, the price of new released IPhone 11 is more expensive than a previous model. According to an article, the main reason for this turns out to be a huge amount of money on advertisements. Furthermore, companies have a tendency to give people biased information related to their items, which makes it difficult for people to distinguish drawbacks from advantages. In light of the above, I also find these persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, it can be concluded that each side of the debate has its strengths, as discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30933333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21180710643 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581333333333 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3492127792 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.789473684 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177855335759 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482866366304 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468784118806 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103514888263 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543687828146 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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