Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.
Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
There are two schools of thought about whether students need to attend extra classes ,even after studying at school and on a weekend or parents should let their children relax after a long hard-working day. To my mind, I subscribe to the latter idea as the thinking of extra classes will boost exam marks is flawed because schoolwork is enough and if they are forced into over studying, it will result in a great deal of insidious effects afterwards.
Education for children has become more complex and nerve-racking than ever before. This means that they have to prepare their lessons beforehand or else they will get behind their friends. In addition, the amount of homework they receive everyday is amassing instead of reducing so after 8 hours attending schools, students are forced into doing homework for another 2 or 3 hours without having proper rest. Therefore, if they still have to go to extra classes, children will sooner or later run out of energy ,hence a counter-productive impact on their performance. In addition, more supplementary classes are at the expense of withdrawal from social activity. Since students’ time is spent closing off in the classroom and embedding in table desk, their communication skills and social circles with other people will decline and the chance that they are less advantageous than their peers when finding future occupation is pretty high.
Moreover, students who are inundated with excessive studying time undergo direct influence on their well-being. An increase in the number of students who attend extra classes are coping with deprivation of sleep every day .As a result, it does violence to their mental health, causing mental distraction and deterioration in some skills such as analytical and problem-solving skills. Gradually, this hinders students’ progess and leads to low grades as well as lack of enthusiasm when going to school. Statistically speaking, a growing number of depression in students is caused by their stressful studying programme. Therefore, students should be given more time to learn something that school program doesn’t include which they find it intriguing and engrossing.
All in all, it is understandable that parents only want the best for their progeny. However, I believe that they should listen to their kids more to get to know what is actually the most effect approach for their education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84115242001 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5260423208 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224644079304 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720634147725 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563442678108 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132100312639 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574038774851 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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