nowadays, parents are very serious about their children's lives. some parents arrange an extra class for their child after school hours and others not. the intention behind doing this is same just the difference is in the methods. in this competitive world, one should get ready for every challenges and parents have this concerns for their child so they try to become more aware about his child's study.
every brain are not the same. so, some children need extra tuitions and some don't, but parents need to worry about their child's health also. it is very important to be fit and fine both physically and mentally. they do not force their child to focus on their studies because it creates pressure in their minds and they completely lost their control to think something and many times it results into depression. it is necessary to gain good knowledge but it doesn't mean that a child has to study on his holiday or weekends also. this time is only for fun and parents needs to understand this. personally, i do not believe to take extra classes because nowadays, teachers in the schools are providing their best to the child so one should not worry about it. after 6 or 7 hours of school, kid feel tired and not able to attend an extra class so he should need rest and teachers also giving so much homework to him so he wants to complete that also. and when it becomes routine to do only study then it invites health problems.
in the conclusion, i prefer to not organise extra class because it becomes very difficult to manage everything and a child do not get any time for his hobby or any other activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5724137931 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26663752284 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.110289866 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280082617888 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963007017975 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567860637485 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207505523576 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332932915542 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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