levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
what are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
As we have seen from last few decades, the number of crime has increased in the youth. we should have to think about its causes and try to remove it. it become very dangerous for us as well their lives also.
If we are talking about its reason, the things i get in my mind is drugs, alcohol, smoking.these are the major factors which derived young once to get into wrong way. the ratio of getting these bad habits in students and adults are continually raising. this can provoke them to do some major wrong things like rape, smuggling, theft and what not. it is actually very terrible. they are also not in their senses to know that they are doing wrong. girls are also involved in these things and it is not shocking now a days. sometimes poverty is can also be the reason behind illegal activity.
government also taking steps to stop the kind of things. in my point of view these bad habits are the actual reason for doing crime. they should have to be punished by government but first we should stop them before it covers whole youth. for that government should ban health injuries products and out a very high fine if anyone caught with these things. parents also be aware about what their children are doing. government should stop import these things and make strict laws against these activities. there is also severe punishments for teenagers also, as because they are young, the courts are too lenient. also we should try to decrease the level of poverty.
in conclusion, i would say several factors have led to increases in youth crime, but measures are also available to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63986013986 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24290547492 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5562198917 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8421052632 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137691620079 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431078909979 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475755376261 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971927756103 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029095962874 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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