In many parts of the world, people rely on private cars for transportation.
In what ways does reliance on private cars affect the way we live?
Do the effects tend to be positive or negative?
Owning a private vehicle has been the most reliable mode of transportation in recent years. The abundance of personal vehicles on the road cause a lot of traffic congestion and have negative impacts on our health and the environment, even though they are very convenient.
The abundance of personal cars on the road cause traffic congestion. In developed cities, one of the difficulties people face is the problem of traffic congestion because many people own their own cars. The excessive number of cars attribute to the traffic congestion city people face. Setting realistic goals of getting to places on time is impossible. This leads to a lot of stress and frustration thereby shortening the lifespan of people in the city.
Cars also release toxic gases such as carbon monoxide and nitrous oxides which react with the oxygen in the atmosphere to cause harmful effects on our health such as respiratory problems, cancer, even stroke. These harmful gases also trap more heat from the sun and make the earth too warm, thereby prevent the survival of plants and animals. Therefore, the more cars on the road, the more harmful gases are released.
One of the major benefits of privately owned vehicles is the convenience they offer. A person can choose to go anywhere at any time of the day even when the public transportation companies have closed. Someone could also choose a preferred job irrespective of the proximity to train or bus stations. You can live anywhere you want, no matter the distance when you have your own vehicle.
In conclusion, even though personal cars offer convenience, there are also a lot of drawbacks in owning one. The negative consequences on our health and environment outweigh the benefit of convenience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03767123288 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72283104066 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1303410891 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133781537467 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457129454173 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316998635436 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634865059432 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268794006836 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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