Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world.
Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Obesity has become a serious public health issue mainly because of readily available fast foods due to the advancement in technology and the increase in remote workers and homeschoolers among other reasons. Luckily, there are many ways of combating this problem.
Obesity is on the rise due to the numerous fast food restaurants on every block and with the advancement in technology, various startups are running food delivery services. For example, Doordash delivers foods within minutes of order placement. This means that fast foods are very readily available. Fast foods also contain a lot of trans fat and sugar which contribute greatly to obesity.
Another reason for the increase in the number of obese people in our society is telecommuting and homeschooling. Nowadays, a vast number of people work from home as such, they do not do as much needed daily exercise. Homeschooling is on the rise now as well and after classes, children still do not run around the home but they rather sit down in front of their computers or video games. These contribute massively to the obesity epidemic.
Fortunately, there are solutions to help everyone stay healthy. Investing in healthy meal alternatives is a great start. Addition of physical education to homeschool curriculum is another important way of getting children into physical fitness. Encouraging workers to take a break to walk will increase productivity amongst remote worker. Education of the general public on the need to curb obesity by creating public parks for exercising and encouraging fitness. Increasing the taxes on fast foods while reducing the taxes on healthy meals is a great way the government can help. The government could provide subsidy on farm products.
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- In many parts of the world people rely on private cars for transportation In what ways does reliance on private cars affect the way we live Do the effects tend to be positive or negative 61
- Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...amongst remote worker. Education of the general public on the need to curb obesity by creating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26164874552 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81327989177 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8895921891 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3529411765 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130440573688 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419546479564 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466142481794 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806676909739 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041970212953 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.