In many parts of the world there is continous coverage of sports on television.some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.
It is often argued that most of the sports events are continous telecast through television. But few folks are not satisfied with this facility and think it demotivates the young people and they loss interest to taking part in sports activities. This essay intend to analyse firstly, this view point and at the last share my opinion.
To begin with, first and foremost reason, live telecast of sports discourages youngsters when most of the players get highly injured and not able to participate in sports for long time. So, for this reason, majority of the indivisuals have fear and worries while, choosing sports carrier. Because, unconditionaly if, any major bone may break then , they not able to do anything. This gives a huge loss to their achivements. Also, they loose postiveness regard sports. For instance, hindustan times newspaper conducted a survey and realize, 40% players spoil their carrier due to injuries, inspite they are good player.
Furthermore, it is clearly recogonised through television sports shows , indivisuals participate in sports in epidemic way so, it increase the level of difficulty and struggle. It takes long time to become good player on national and international level.Especialy, majority of the indivisuals notice it is very hardworking task and less chance for sucess as compare to other study fields.
After pondering over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation with my self. I have to come this opinion, sports events telecasting is beneficial for citizens, during watching they build confidence to get win for own country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87425303734 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9963585434 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223415184697 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754318543958 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730053022993 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135346582536 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898923188538 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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