In many parts of the world, women study science and technology but do not work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?
It is true that while women provide higher perception in terms of studying in science and work, women’s workforce less than men at the same deparment.This essay will provide several solutions to tackle women’s work issue in technology and science.
To begin with, there are a variety viable solutions to overcome with this issue.Firstly, women should be encouraged by their parents from childhood. Parents are playing important role in children life owing to fact that they mimic their parents as a role models. If parents show how essential to work in science and technology field in order to provide a bright future for next generation, this would lead a positive impact on their children. Secondly,according to recent researchers girls outperform boys in the science and technology. Those sorts of scientific documents may help to women motivate, and as a result of thath more and more women start to work so as to build future of countries.
Perhaps one of another reasons why women do not work in science and technology companies is that women are more likely to want work while having children, so if employers obtain kindergarden or nanny subsidies as perks, this probably lead to more women’s appealing work in a relief. Furthermore, employers provide a flexible time for their women worker so as to pass more time with their family due to fact that females are worriedsick about their children and home over the male. For example, researcher has proven that one of factor why the number of females is less than male worker in science and technoloy is that those sorts of companies usually have overworking time, which is why women have less interest in those companies.
In conclusion, I believe that if women are supported by their family and companies, they will have a great intention to become workforce of technological and science-based companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06472491909 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86567340769 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527508090615 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6893516747 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325733526955 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131098251439 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983079633397 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214247327144 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529006652424 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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