In the past people made better use of their free times than they do today. Do you agree or disagree?
Making leisure times was fruitful in ancient time as opposed to in the fast paced competitive era, the usage of time has transformed altogether. I, however, side with the both views and these perspectives will be examined in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Two glaring claims of the consumption of the past time that how it was better are enumerated following. Since unquestionably, being a deficient of technology people had a spare deal of time to devote with each other. They often had a chance to mingle up with their friends and family to discuss sorts of obstacles in their life. To add to it, human life was completely relied on themselves not on any kind of artificial intelligence. The second reason is that our ancestors were more health conscious because they comtemplated that they are unable to get success in life unless thay do not have a healthy diet. To epitome it, our grandparents say that Jegry, Mustered leaves with maze bread, Butter and Curd such meals were included in their daily diet plan. So, definitely, in this respect, they gave too much time to be hale and hearty in earlier.
Despite the above mentioned agrees' points, there are another striking views about the present scenario, why I assume people are capable to deal with time much better as compared to the past. By the invention of technical gadgets for instance Computers and Cell Phones, individuals have tons of opportunities not only to entertain but also for education purpose without going everywhere. Today, if I talk about education field so Undoubtedly, pupils try to use their time best for their study on the Internet. Internet does not mean everyone uses it wrongly it has plethora of merits as well. What is more, though people have become workaholic owing to busy schedule, somewhere they get time to stay with their parents.
To compandium and reiterate my opinion, although todays generation has forgot to draw a line between work and faimly, still they are aware the significance of time where and when do something as per proper period of time.
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...ere and when do something as per proper period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, still, well, as for, for instance, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91354466859 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68620052249 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64553314121 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0638527174 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285515555489 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810000390616 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554325218098 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152032996585 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514166686519 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.