In this day and age, it is undeniable that more and more people want to claim a balance life, but in fact, there is ust a minority of them can succeed. This essay will discuss the affected reasons and provide my final solutions in order to tackle is issue.
There are several reasons that leads to an unsuccessful achievement. First of all, we are now living in a developing world, so, it correlates to an increase of works that people have to deal with. Thus, it is completely difficult for workers to stay balance between the amount of works and homes. For instance, in 24-hour day, entrepreneurs have to spent more than 8 hours working at the office and at least 4 hours revising tasks after work. It is clear that more than a half of day is spent out just only to make a living, so, it is easy to understand why people in the work age cannot handle both work and personal activities. Furthermore, in a complex environment, more people intend to work harder than anything else to get update with higher cost of living. In addition, only succeeded people can live balance life without challenges.
Nevertheless, solutions for this still exist. To begin, people should reduce a time in companies to receive more family-being moments. Next, health and stress levels should be monitored and taken care by individuals, so, adults should not only concentrate on earning money and miss to love inner-self. For example, citizens inn all ages need to arrange doctors in order to avoid adverse impacts on both physical and mental health because of busy works. Moreover,it is a good idea to spend at least 30 minutes going to gym or doing sports, and eat more green food indeed. Hence, all of these habits will laterly result in a better life.
To conclude, work hard is good and neccessary in our era. Otherwise, stay balance and healthy is more crucial to expand life expectancy. Having mentioned solutions above, I strongly believe that readers can adjust their habits and acheive work-life balance in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58366769835 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0358250065 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189938331876 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595050093195 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469198429894 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111324588633 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488699357305 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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