Many people are afraid to leave their home because of the crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime.while other feel that little action can be done to stop crime.what is your view.
No one can deny the fact that crime is burgeoning day by day which lead to curtailing the masses on local streets. While some demographics of society opine that this could not be controlled properly, I would contend that plethora of ways can be used to tackle with this issue.
on the one hand, it is fairly easy to comprehend why some people assert that this problem could not be halted because of the recomting of violation by criminals after releasing from prison. when a law breakers get imprisoned, they would make the collaboration group with the prisoners; Consequently, they tried to get revenge from their enemies and reoffend again. This problem can be tackled by rendering vocational training to culprit in rehabilitation centers, this can enhance their skills and assist to secure a paid job that is likely to earn their livelihood. In short, educating offenders may act as luminary object for lawless person but this cannot sure that this approach will change the psychology of a criminal.
On the one hand, giving punishment according to the severity of crime may close the paradora's box. There is not only generation of strict and appropriate punishment law, but their proper implementation would aid to deter the delinquent. Although in the UK and Italy capital punishment is abandoned, executing this could act as a work wonders for declining the wrongdoings like sexual harrasments etcetera. Thus, the execution of punishment proportional to the prevention of transcription rate dramatically
To conclude, however it is difficult to pursue the lawless person on the ground again, education trainings and efforts of the government would diminish this threat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19485294118 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92982875236 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9150308917 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138765720062 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537969931533 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044765454625 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768082870321 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578428238272 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.