Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether more measures should be introduced to prevent crime. While there are some reasons for little actions can be done, I believe that it is necessary to take more actions to prevent crime and make community safer.
First and foremost, although there have already existed various regulations for punishing people who commit crimes, there should be more emphasis laid on mental health which is a key factor for crime prevention, as many criminals are suffered from the diversity of mental health problems. To be more specific, criminals with mental health problems are hard to find reasonable ways to release their pressure or anxiety without accurate instructions, then they are likely to conduct anti-social offenses and embark on the criminal road. In addition, more knowledge about the mental health should be imparted among teenagers especially those in countryside where education resources are relatively poor. This action can not only be as a prevention for crime, but also it helps develop teenagers’ healthy personalities which are beneficial for paving their ways for future career development.
Furthermore, given the rapid advancements in technology and the internet nowadays, more high-tech methods can be applied to people’s daily life, enhancing citizen’s awareness of crime. Take the case of online fraud, which is a typical crime issue and police found it hard to deal with it in the past few years. To tackle this problem, an app called ‘anti-fraud’ was invented in China and each citizen is compulsory to download it, thorough which, some fake number can be detected, and people’s awareness of crime have also been cultivated.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that much more money will be invested to the prevention of crime, which are supposed to go to other investment areas, such as, technological innovation. Ironically, when the safety of community is ensured, more citizens are willing to leave their homes to work, which could further give a boost to the economic growth of city in the long run. Therefore, taking more measures to crime prevention is also rewarded from the aspect of finance.
In conclusion, though crime prevention is costly to some extent, the advantages of it still outweigh such investment. Hence, I strongly believe that more actions should be taken for preventing crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33244680851 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82074297567 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587765957447 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1554938191 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.214285714 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404099173182 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152069171146 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849369186358 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24936552983 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082375907317 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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