Many people believe that the increasing use of modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people’s creativity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that people’s creativity is being reduced by largely using modern technology. I strongly disagree with this opinion for several reasons.
First and foremost, applying advanced technology can improve feasibility of creative ideas at work as modern technology is helpful for solving some basic problems and improve working efficiency. To be more specific, the world today runs at an unprecedentedly fast speed and various amazing ideas are required to show up and even be achieved to ensure the surging development. However, it always takes a long time to check the accuracy of one creative proposal, which not only consumes time but also costs. Modern technology is the hand which can provide help to give a boost to this process and provide staff with confidence, so that people will be more creative at work.
Furthermore, modern technology makes people have more accesses to various types of activities in leisure time, which could reactive people’s mind through interesting games. Take the case of Switch, a typical game machine among thousands, which is quite popular among all ages of group, including elder generations. Switch offers interactive and multi-functional platform to play diverse meaningful games. As a result, young generations could come up with new ideas from overcoming tasks in games and elder generations can do some sports through gaming which could accelerate their thinking ability.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that relying too much on technology will make people be lazy and escape from deeper thinking. Ironically, people could enhance self-awareness of critical thinking whenever they take advantage of modern technology and we could keep in mind the point that our brain is the most important weapon to dealing with information and tasks in daily life, while advanced technology is only a helper. Therefore, accurately utilizing modern technology could increase our integrated ability.
To summarize, I believe that modern technology is beneficial for people’s creativity both at work and in leisure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lt, young generations could come up with new ideas from overcoming tasks in games...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.496875 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90399610182 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0970335398 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.642857143 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312130698237 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112718825697 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103020081735 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201981099078 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083303919817 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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