Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The increasing number of crimes in public places has been becoming a prevalent cause of concern for citizens around the world. To eradicate crime, some people opine that it is a must to apply more effective measures, while others insist it is almost impossible to achieve that goal. Personally, although eliminating offences is entirely infeasible, alleviating the crime wave can be achieved with the assistance of more efforts.
More measures to address crime will promote the safety of citizens if they can approach and ameliorate existing situations that lead to crime. One of the situations is that there are not sufficient police officers patrolling at nighttime, when offences, such as rape and violent attack, normally occur. It is practical to prevent most of those crimes with either the introduction of a more widespread surveillance system or an increase in the number of police officers. Another factor that exacerbates the crime wave is the lack of self-protection awareness, with which potential victims can dramatically reduce the risk of being offended by realizing and staying away from the potential danger. Consequently, governments should attach more importance to the promotion of this kind of awareness. However, those efforts can only reduce the crime rate, and it is almost impossible to eradicate crime because they simply focus on how to increase the difficulty of criminal behaviour rather than solve the cause of crime.
Given the fact that it is the high unemployment rate and lack of resources that lead to crime, there is no practical method that can wipe out those factors and eliminate crime. Unemployed people are more likely to be indigent and starved, and they can, in most cases, do nothing but to commit a crime to alleviate those predicaments because they lack regular income. Unfortunately, there is no direct approach to overcome the limitation, including limited resources and scientific technology, rendering the positions fewer than people need. Also, it is impossible to meet the demand for everyone with limited resources, and the resulting gap between the rich and the poor might continue to induce the latter to commit a crime for better lives.
On balance, it is admitted that little can be done to prevent crime for those insurmountable causes of crime, but more effective ways are worth the effort for a lower crime rate and better safety in public areas.
- Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 11
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e crime, some people opine that it is a must to apply more effective measures, while ot...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rate and better safety in public areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, while, kind of, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18461538462 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8191185365 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.4167607042 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.428571429 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268016081602 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097200403487 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585560686698 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18470344226 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224604524653 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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