Many people are afraid of leaving their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
The high crime rate had led to a phenomeno that plenty of people are afraid of leaving home, which impair the social security and stability. there are conflicting views regarding whether crime could be prevented or not. Personally, i believe that this problem could be done to reduce the high crime rate efficiently.
On the one hand, some people believe that there are some solutions that will ensure people leaving their home safer. Firstly, the government should have more restrict in the law of crimes. For those who commit felony like murder, they should restrict punishment such as life imprisonment or death penalty. they migh be aware of being caught. As a result, some of them may give up their illegal plans. Moreover, some people recommit that after being released they can not find a job and making a living. this is also the reason why the crime still rise. If education training can provided in prison, they will have a opportunity to have a job when they go back to society, this measure could lead them to correct path. Lastly, the education system should play a vital role in preventing crimes. School can provide moral lesson and teach students to become a good people. this could prevent the posibilitiesof becoming criminals when they grow up.
On the other hand, others argue that nothing can be done to hold this view for serveral reasons. To begin with, a fear of crime is a state of mind by the media. For example, we are approached more violent movies or just the negative news in our street. Thus, the belief is that what ever we do to reduce this level of crime, people still afraid of it.
In conclusion, although decreasing crimes is a challenger and the prevention can be achieve through many ways. Therefore, both government and education system should take responsibility to build a secure sociaty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80379746835 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48881490824 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7848955009 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388987855246 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105346874573 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704897342778 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221341205999 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034650930166 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.