Young people learn more about good behavior from books or flims than they learn from real-life experiences.
Agree or Disagree ?
there are a growing concern about films and books are a better approach for the young to form their behavior than learning them on their own. However, I completely disagree with this idea because learning through hands-on experiences is more impactful.
To begin with, young kids are able to learn good behavior in real-life such as school. they can have a right education with the instruction of teacher and get some practice with their classmates. The most salient example of this is in VietNam where young children will learn the greeting rituals of different generation and the communication of modern society and then practice with friends.
On the other hand, films or books are not a superior way to learn good lesson as there are many negative role in most of them.
To be more specific, characters in such form are usually idealized and exaggerated before apealing to audiences. Therefore, they may creat a set of behavior which were immoral and violent in reality. For an illustration, the image of Joker in the movie with the same name is cruel and aggressive but admired by numberous young people to be a hero in some ways. As a result, many of them tend to mimick his actions in real- life without thinking of consequences, that these are wrong and not suitable for our life.
In conclusion, with the above negative of allowing kids to learn good action by books and movies. For these reasons, young children learning throung experiences is more effective to control behavior and attitudes. It is suggested that both parrents and schools should take a responsible for the knowledge that these kids are received.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90217391304 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64202491116 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0291771331 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325728397538 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113098320974 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08082066322 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176866226781 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570923719451 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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