Many people are choosing to live in the cities. To what extent do the benefits of living in cities outweigh the disadvantages ?
It is believed that lots of people prefer living in the urban areas. This is because, opportunities to live there are to receive high salary and easy entertainment access so that these merits outbalance demerits.
To begin with, living in big cities provides a benefit to have accessibility to some entertaining places. However, persons staying at metropolis still suffer from mental issues due to work pressure. Even though workers are mentally exhausted in working space, they can still heal their own self to go to various entertainment facilities. For example, In Jakarta, central of business activity in Indonesia, when employees are pressured to do nine-to-five jobs to finish tasks based on company targets, a number of pubs open 24 hours in order to release stress because of such typical jobs, and easy to reach because most of these places are close to the working district.
Furthermore, someone settling in big towns has a tendency to gain the best payment. Nevertheless, the consequence is to sacrifice their quality time to meet relatives. Nonetheless, the money that they obtain can be spent to buy primary and secondary necessities for wife and children, that is to say that they reach stable economy, having a tendency to compel the family members. For instance, people in New York occupying as an IT professional allocate 14 hours daily, possessing no time to share with kids and wife, but the monthly salary accounts for above 2000 dollars. Therefore, the children possess the best education, and his wife wears the trendy fashion every day.
In conclusion, to settle in a metropolis reveals positive development to easily access to amusement places, and to obtain the best income, outbalancing drawbacks. If persons desire to avoid the negativity, the solution will be to manage time properly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'settles'.
Suggestion: settles
...working district. Furthermore, someone settling in big towns has a tendency to gain the...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...stance, people in New York occupying as an IT professional allocate 14 hours daily, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1593220339 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85900403122 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657627118644 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5411877671 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101919972153 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380318156516 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689199035511 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612814565611 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058431599501 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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