Childcare courses are classes for parents on the basics of parenting. Some individuals considered that parents should join the childcare session, which is beneficial for both parents and children too. I strongly agreed with this statement.
There are various reasons why I think childcare education is important. The main one of them is the overall development of the children. As we know, children are the future of the country and infants should be born healthy and mentally strong. It is possible only when parents gave the priority to childcare education.Another reason is that parents realize their responsibilities towards their children. In most of the cases, parents showed their negligence attitude for children and As a result, kids faced serious consequences because of that. For instance, kids suffered from disabilities like polio in third world countries as parents are not available to injected their kids timely.
Further, this education is essential for parents to enhance their love and affection for new born babies. So, parents will be able to understand the needs of their children when they emotionally attached with them. Last but not least, a child needs a care from both parents. It is not only the duty of mother to take the all the responsibility of their children as father is equally responsible for that too.
Hence, one can concluded that for a better future of a kids as well as for society, childcare courses are the need of the hour. These should therefore be made more popular especially in the low strata of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a kid' or simply 'kids'?
Suggestion: a kid; kids
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore, third, well, as for, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07003891051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82666547354 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9777071861 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233189395872 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089455515795 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669165802066 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167052448365 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784064987044 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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