Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and effects?
It is true that more and more people prefer to work in longer hours for some benefits. The reasons for this issue may be because of the need for money to support family and the requirement from the companies asking their workers to spend more time to complete their tasks, however, the harmful effects behind it are beyond a doubt.
At first, when entering the labor market, laborers always tend to make more money to stabilize their own life, which leads to the fact that they would spend more time on their work despite the long hour. Furthermore, a number of companies have published regulations asking their employees to work overtime for the companies’ development. In 2020, it has been reported in VnExpress news that 60% of enterprises in Vietnam requiring their workers to spend more time for the job and this number is higher than that of 2019 at 55%.
Due to the pressure of longer working hour, people may face a lot of risks, especially for their health. They may suffer from spinal, neck or shoulder pain, which would cause their retirement to happen sooner than their expectation. In addition, the stress from working overtime could lead to high depression and mental illness. Japan is a great example of this issue, annually, 20% of the employees commit suicide due to long depression from working without treatment.
In conclusion, money and prosperity may be the main reasons for longer-hour working and the effects behind it is very toxic, not only to human’s physical condition, but also to their mental health. As a result, they should take some methods to balance between work and their private life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90974729242 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46821602457 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4575970827 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.636363636 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208864835592 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980616853368 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104113399172 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152977387746 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665293042594 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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