Many countries import large amounts of food from other parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development
It is believed that there are conflicting views about the fact that a lot of food is imported from around the world to one nation. Although there could be some advantages for poor people in developing countries, however, such action could create bad affection to the society since the waste of those food may pollute the natural environment.
Firstly, imported food can be useful for countries, which suffer from serious famine. Furthermore, it is such a waste if dumping food to the rubbish bag, while people can use it to feed starving civilians in poor nations. Madagascar, for example, is famous for the starvation throughout this country for years. The government in this state had no other choice but to ask for food support from other welfare countries, to feed their people.
On the other hand, importing food can also be considered as a serious problem to the living environment. The carbon released from dumped food could cause serious consequences to the air. According to air report published on VnExpress news in 2019, there is a connection between the carbon from wasted food and the pollution in the atmosphere. From 2009 to 2019, the air quality in Brazil had decreased from 67% to 64% and one of the reasons that caused such issue is because of imported food.
In conclusion, despite the fact that many countries are in need of imported food use, importing too much this kind of food may cause some negative problems, especially the environment issue in one country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
...ction to the society since the waste of those food may pollute the natural environment. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93253968254 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62707703763 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3841152219 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30997151497 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120935104454 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616096907072 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189782562869 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040071289756 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.