Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and effects?
In this day and age, it is generally known that the rising number of people have a tendency to spend more time working than in the past. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon and the significant impact that it has on each individual and society.
People choose to dedicate themselves to working long hours because they may want to improve their financial capability and pursue their career prospects. Firstly, a lot of people are the pillar of their family, and it would be beneficial for them to work harder to earn enough living, and therefore would lead to a higher standard of living. In fact, numerous companies reward their employees with a higher amount of income if they are able to work overtime. Secondly, countless individuals are willing to work longer hours to fulfill their career development. As they are more diligent and productive than their workmates, they are able to be a potential figure for promotion which inevitably results in higher positions and salaries.
For those aforementioned reasons, this proclivity could have a considerable impact on both society and individuals. First of all, working longer hours provides people with personal achievements. By dint of putting endless effort into working process, people are likely to reach their full potential and give out the best job performances. However, if they do not distribute their time smartly, they will end up harming their mental energy and health, because they might feel under stress and strain of lethargic and tedious workload. As a result, this could detrimentally affect brain development. Secondly, this trend may be contributed to the development of the whole society with regard to economic progress. People are likely to become more competitive, therefore pushing their limits and in turn significantly increasing the national profit.
In conclusion, this trend may develop greatly in the future due to the financial situations and career ladder of numerous citizens, and thus may affect both society and individuals dramatically.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28615384615 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82122135623 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8718692916 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.533333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173410084551 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685364746221 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911036958195 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934582517944 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573930444094 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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