Many people put their personal information online (address,
telephone number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks
or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, numerous people reveal their personal information and their daily activities on social media sites. From my perspective, I agree that this pattern of behavior harms individuals.
On the one hand, updating personal information online facilitates a superior experience for online shoppers. By associating personal details with exclusive accounts, consumers can make more convenient online purchases. For example, when people shop on e-commerce platforms such as Amazon or Facebook, their identity information has already been synchronized with their sign-in accounts during an initial by first registration, and customers therefore can skip the time-consuming data entry and transfer immediately to the final step of making a transaction. Thus, the buying process is expedited, fostering an overall convenient customer experience.
On the other hand, posting personal data on the internet makes users potentially susceptible to criminal and bullying activities. First of all, people are prone to being the intended victims of internet-based crimes. For example, many cyber criminals create fake accounts to groom fifteen-year-old girls and use the personal information of these little girls to harass them. Savvy hackers or high-tech criminals can easily exploit a wealth of vulnerable consumer data and trick people into giving them money. Secondly, by exposing private information on the internet, people are vulnerable to cyberbullies. Because the internet offers countless bullies a shield of anonymity, they feel safe when spewing negativity and attacking a lot of victims without receiving the repercussions as these bullying activities were to happen in the real world.
In conclusion, although the idea of putting personal activities on social networks offers some potential benefits, I concur with the argument that this pattern of behavior is seen as a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77659574468 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0966138203 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5715390857 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243792944436 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780643077917 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704300784092 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148863394348 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310134811456 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.