Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and effects?
In this day and age, the rising number of people tends to spend more time working than in the past. There are several reasons behind this phenomenon and the significant impact having on each individual and society.
People choose to dedicate themselves to working long hours because they may want to improve their financial capability and pursue their career prospects. Firstly, many people are the pillar of their family, and it would be beneficial for them to work harder to earn enough living. It, therefore, leads to a higher standard of living. Numerous companies would reward their employees with a higher amount of income if they could work overtime. Secondly, countless individuals are willing to work longer hours to fulfill their career development. As they are more diligent and productive than their workmates, they can be a potential figure for promotion which inevitably results in higher positions and salaries.
For the above reasons, this pattern could have a considerable impact on both society and individuals. First of all, working longer hours provides people with personal achievements. By putting endless effort into the working process, people are likely to reach their full potential and give out the best job performances. However, if they do not distribute their time smartly, they will harm their mental health, because they might feel under stress and strain of tedious workload. As a result, this could detrimentally affect brain development. Secondly, this trend may contribute to the development of the whole society concerning economic progress. People are likely to become more competitive, therefore pushing their limits and significantly increasing the national profit.
In conclusion, this trend may develop in the future due to the financial situations and career prospects of numerous citizens, and thus may affect both society and individuals dramatically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4406779661 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77999997933 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2627132879 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19211308811 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690360199404 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912678869254 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101368649133 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640427427621 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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