Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
While some people suppose that organizing a global sporting event is beneficial to the nation, others doubt that it is detrimental. From my point of view, a country will undoubtedly gain a lot from holding these sports occasions.
Some people believe that all these sporting shows are advantageous to the country. First of all, they can easily broaden their relationships with the other countries. In the other words, many athletes join in the events, opening a new stage of friendship. Thanks to the spirit of sport, the country is an ideal place to share, connect and join hands to conquer new heights in sport. For example, Tokyo Olympics 2021, on the evening of August 8, with a vibrant, culturally-imbued and meaningful closing ceremony, showing the noble festival of sportsmanship and friendship among nations. Secondly, by maintaining an amiable image, the country, thus, can greatly attract an substantially increasing number of tourists. Needless to say, local towns and cities can earn a large amount of profit.
On the other hand, the others may find these sporting events detrimental to the nation. Firtsly, the dramatic rise in international people who come to enjoy sporting events, leading to the cause of traffic congestion and public littering. It stands to the reason that local citizens have to deal with the environmental consequences. Secondly, hosting a big international sports event inevitably blocks local people's regular activities. For example, their favourite TV shows have to be replaced by countless broadcasting of sports events. Familiar coffee shops are full of people waiting eagerly for the show, covering all their weekend seats.
In conclusion, while the country clearly attain quiet a lot benefits from hosting sports events, they may face other consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22073578595 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93533854038 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3181125459 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250518027653 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822110513706 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751537573479 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15563210531 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045484114806 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.