The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole
Most notifications about dangerous cases or situations on social media compared to news related to positive things can affect everyone personally and even society at large. I totally disagree with this opinion stating that news describing important situations is considered capable of damaging people.
Firstly, through news related to outstanding issues will be able to increase human anticipation. Problems that may appear on the internet will always be different depending on the surrounding circumstances. The news broadcasted through the internet will help people to take appropriate action in making decisions about the situation. For Example, Indonesia is currently shocked by the tragic case of premeditated murder, through this incident it makes everyone become vigilant and careful of others, especially strangers. That’s way, notification of a problem is very necessary because it can maintain the safety of people.
Secondly, The reporting of emergency news is the highest level that should be applied to all news media. Emergency news will enable everyone to make the right decisions to deal with the situation. Reporting such things is highly recommended and mandatory for all media because it will be able to create prosperity for the community. For instance, 2019 was a year full of disasters and plagued with thousands of problems due to the spread of covid-19, through this news everyone can be prepared to prepare preventive measures such as buying masks, hand sanitizers and others. Thus, it is very important to expose the emergency.
To conclude, the media must be able to provide news that is in accordance with concrete facts so that no debate arises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, even so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39163498099 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8745800385 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5780505485 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160114653499 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601146483477 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530088883707 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097130529044 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364141232297 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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