It is believed that every nation has to put food production at the top of priorities so that it can meet an increasing demand of all citizens. As a result, importing food from other countries should also be minimized . Personally, I totally agree with the given idea due to its merits, which will be discussed more specifically in the following essay.
Firstly, it contributes greatly to the economic development which results from the reduction of employment rate as well as food price. A great number of emloyees will be involved in the food manufacture and become the main workforce who cannot be replaced by modern technology. Besides, in comparison with imported products, native food's price will be much lower but sometimes with higher quality. Taking use of cheap labour and available resources from home country will definitely balance food values and its quality.
Secondly, food self-provision plays a vital role in securing food supplies to all inhabitants under any circumtances. In these days and age, people have been coping with a numerous serious pandemics such as Covid 19 and any nations, cities or certain areas are sometimes on the verge of being locked down during quarantine times. Therefore, enough food production had better be ranked the first place to get rid of hunger and starvation which might happen more easily to the poor in society.
In short , being independent from importing food from other countries by providing enough food for its own country's population is undeniably advantageous, including economic growth, price decrease as well as food security. However, people are living in a commercial world where trading and exchanging products are mandatory parts , minimizing imported products does not mean to ignore better quality food from other nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, in short, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25174825175 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78775937834 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657342657343 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.95516572 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.545454545 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249978649698 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10166347352 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063890809112 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159223114945 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462099870805 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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