Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the highly controversial issue in nowadays is pollution. Some people believe that increasing automobiles causing the air pollution. where as, other trust that growing industries widely cause the environmental damage. This essay will discuss both the views.
On the one hand, if we see, metropolitan cities increases rapidly with huge population which leads to increase the usage of own vehicle, such as cars, motorcycles. Even though government provide public transport, drastic inclination of population in cities can't help to avoid using private transport which causes a lot of air pollution and noise pollution. To prevent this countries such as Norway encourage the people to use electric vehicle by providing the subsidy to purchase.
On the other hand, growing industries creates more job opportunity which is a positive vibe but they damages the world all the ways. Even though they are responsible for the growth of country GDP, it harms the nature in the same way. If we consider industries namely pharma, oil they release toxic gases, huge waste causes both air and soil pollution. Along with this, the chemicals released from this unites causes water pollution which leads to harmful diseases especially for children.
To conclude, Automobiles and Industries both are the main factors for the pollution. However, Vehicles pollutes the atmosphere by degrading the air quality which harms the human beings. pollution from the Industries effects both mankind as well animals. In my view, both factors degrading the environment as we are humans have to find the solution to reduce it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
One of the highly controversial issue in nowadays is pollution. Some people believe that ...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
... automobiles causing the air pollution. where as, other trust that growing industries...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... automobiles causing the air pollution. where as, other trust that growing industries wi...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tic inclination of population in cities cant help to avoid using private transport w...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...llution and noise pollution. To prevent this countries such as Norway encourage the ...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'damage'
Suggestion: damage
...unity which is a positive vibe but they damages the world all the ways. Even though the...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pollution
...r quality which harms the human beings. pollution from the Industries effects both mankin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, in fact, such as, in my view, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34645669291 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72173415595 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7724988448 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259318078411 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890334842114 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544353529878 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164345475175 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684663817912 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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