One of the highly controversial issues nowadays is pollution. Developing technology in the global persuaded people to live in many sprawling cities around the world and causes a huge number of manufacturers launched around the cities. Many groups of people represent the consumption of fuel by vehicles that degraded the whole environment, are the cardinal source of atmospheric pollution. Otherwise, it suggested that factories have the responsibility for damaging the atmosphere.
Beyond a shadow of a doubt, some researchers implicated that more than half of the global population will live in the cosmopolitan area by 2050. Most of the people who live in the megacities use their private cars or may use public transportation, so the bulk of vehicles produce an unprecedented scale of pollution. Unfortunately, most of them are not eco-friendly, so that an alarming rate of carbon monoxide emit in the atmosphere. Therefore, most of the people have to suffer intolerable health crisis in these cities.
On the other hand, other advocates that some firms located around the urban have a more pernicious effect on the environment. For example, dumping various wasted production is one of the major factors contributing to water pollution and may damage the metropolitan area. Also, the emission of various greenhouse gases from various industries increases the overall temperature of the earth's surface, resulting in global warming.
It seems to me that both automobiles and manufactures are the supplementary factors in contributing to pollution and waste. Thriving industries and increasing numbers of cars, pushing the earth toward an over-polluted place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62845849802 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38421640606 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596837944664 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8076775507 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225943331083 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708032660841 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565187418645 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128444372648 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577411924521 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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