Many people believe that the increasing use of modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people's creativity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
techonology has changed our lifestyle over a period if time, but has the use of technology reduced people's creativity? Lets discuss this to agree or disagree.
In early days, when technology was not used much, people lead a simple life. they gave attention to family and were connected. With no use of technology they could spend a whole day without getting bored as they had many things they could do. For example: Kids played outside and created new games to keep themsleves occupied. Ladies spent time knitting and they could think of creative patterns with no help of technology. people where more activate phycially and led a healthy life and eat helathy food.
Now a days, due to modern technology people complete their task, or jobs fast. Having more time in hand they are able to mutlitask. technology has made life more simple. Daunting task that took hours together can be completed in quickly. For example: With tractor farmers can plough fields really fast and not much enery is wasted. Women need not spend much time kitchen as cooking is fast with microwave and oven. technology has eased our life.
Although technology has eased our life, creative thinking in people has receded. For instance, with auto correction for text , we dont make effort to learn spelling of words or think to frame a sentence. our thought process is being controlled by techonology. attention span has reduced and importance to creative thinking has decreased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Techonology
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... healthy life and eat helathy food. Now a days, due to modern technology people comple...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
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...lthy life and eat helathy food. Now a days, due to modern technology people comple...
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...ttention span has reduced and importance to creative thinking has decreased. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49760366205 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2057700187 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.8947368421 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7894736842 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201145838267 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618211920342 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705362468139 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13802833329 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058136326799 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.