Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
These days, there is a immensely myriad number of people assumming that living in the countryside brings more merits about lifestyle than that in the cutting-edge cities ; however, others have opposing views. Although I am in consummate accord with this statement, the benefits of that in cities may not be undeniable.
On the one hand, living in the countryside is fruitful about aspects of healthy lifestyle. First and foremost, it brings a huge amount of fresh air, not containing in other areas other than the rural. There can be no kinds of detrimental air like complicatedly chemical compositions from factories releasing into the atmosphere illegally. Secondly, the signature of rural is the character of people being extremely friendly. Whenever somebody, stranger or relatives, is in troubles, people here are always willing to help both mental and physical. For instance, it is clearly illustrated by the event of the Covid-19 Pandemic. In spite of difficult financial circumstances, people still collect their foods they have to support for others who are in isolating areas.
On the other hand, well-being lifestyle of living in the modern cities can not be ignored due to some elements. Firstly, it provides state-of-the-art equipments supporting about mental aspects. Nowadays, many machines help some entertain, be refreshed and reduce pressure after industrious hours. Additionally, advances in hightech bring a wide range of health-related services to city dwellers. For example, many machines effortlessly can diagnose many serious sicknesses like lungs, hearts, gratuanteeing their health and life expectancy.
To sum up, both of two living, whether in the rural or in the city, have beneficial impacts. Personally, I have a tendency to live the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... for others who are in isolating areas. On the other hand, well-being lifestyle ...
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...e ignored due to some elements. Firstly, it provides state-of-the-art equipments ...
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...ave a tendency to live the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50181818182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09258816435 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4401655048 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245929554241 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690538633991 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487388209298 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143154935944 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285172914315 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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