Across the globe, going after a healthy lifestyle has been a strong sentiment. Some assume it is easier to pursue in the countryside, while others think modern city life allows for better health. I choose to reside with the former view, as I believe life in the countryside is far more healthful.
Cities, indeed, can provide the best treatment should their inhabitants fall ill. Not just modern equipment, hospitals in cities come with a denser distribution as well, evenly scattered across the area to assure the lowest rate of patient overload. Even large complexes have built-in hospitals, providing quick access should patients seek for emergency health check-ups. In addition, they can also be exposed to the latest medical news, thanks to there being easy access to up-to-date information. This helps to avoid misinformation that potentially facilitates unhealthy habits, promoting a healthy lifestyle overall. These are the advantages that countryside residents do not get.
They, on the other hand, inherit a myriad of health benefits from being closer to nature, the first and foremost of which is visible health improvements. Exempting oneself from the polluted city atmosphere can result in positive changes in the respiratory system. To be distant from the bustling pace can also decelerate respiration as well as the rate of aging, prolonging life expectancy. Apart from that, exposure to nature has been found to facilitate happiness, and upon reaching contentment, people find it easier to be mindful of their health. Society can expect more people to become health enthusiasts, who encourage others to make healthy life choices.
In short, while the countryside is not as capable as the city in providing its residents with good treatment and the latest health-related news, it improves their health quality and encourages them to make conscious health decisions. There being more healthy people means less strain put on the healthcare system, allocating more opportunities to those really in need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in addition, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39432176656 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83407192878 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2415894651 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216899141604 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647345730479 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456908372695 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134664403799 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517611361583 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.