Many people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is obvious that thanks to the development of technology as well as the improvement in manufacturing industry, information is spread out over the world rapidly and bring people a huge number of choices today. However, I strongly believe that we are exposed to more than enough options for our lives.
Firstly, it is the fact that the invention of Internet has provided undeniable advantages for human life. But on the other hand, it also created the information overload phenomenon in our society which leads to the result that many useless knowledge and wrong advices are published freely without any censorship. Due to that, people nowadays will be lost in choices and can not choose the most suitable option for themselves. For example, in the past, there were only two or three newspapers a week for kids to read with suitable and positive information at their ages. In contrast, today a boy can easily get access to the world wide web and read anything they want, including those bad news and articles with wrong knowledge.
Secondly, the manufacturing industry has extended a lot for the last century which means that there was a significant increase in the number of production companies. Because they have to compete each other for profits, they then put in a lot of unnecessary accessories into their products and introduce more and more forms of goods to give customer more options to choose. For instance, todays there are plenty of choices for people to choose even when it is only a shampoo such as the designing of the bottle, the additional smelt or the sizes we want to take. Some people will argue that these add-ins help us feel more interesting when we go shopping, but in fact, they waste your time and make you become distracted from the real quality of a product.
Inconclusion, I believe that people today have too many options to consider before making a decision which come as the downside of the development in technology and manufacturing industry in recent years.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-21 | vantran2297 | 89 | view |
| 2019-10-06 | cocolico14 | 56 | view |
| 2019-09-21 | ThuBella | 56 | view |
| 2019-09-21 | ThuBella | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-15 | Bejchekkx | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
... plenty of choices for people to choose even when it is only a shampoo such as the d...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89705882353 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68762864824 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6362388898 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4166666667 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144183296072 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500771447798 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432482089916 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963687166817 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461950906344 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.