Many people believe that schools should teach Children to become good citizens and workers rather than independent individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, people have different views about method and technique that the school provides to children. Although some think that School should teach children become more personality rather than social people, the way turn them to be good citizens and workers play a vital role leading social living in harmony life.
There are myriads of reasons providing school systems promote students living in a moral ways and expose to the value of cultures. Initially, Since the development of technology, people nowadays living selfishness by not getting on well with others in the neighborhood and workplace. So, the school is the best place for children that could be accumulated with not only knowledge and skills but also absorb the experiences from school such as communication skills leading them more sociable and helpful. Second, school instill the cultural values that are shared by society. In fact, Cambodia is a nation of collectives culture and mingle various of cultures. If the school do not teach children to expose themselves with society, he or she would not be able to work in the International Company as well.
According to the competing job markets whether children accept or not self-discipline and soft-skills play a vital role in their lives in many ways. First, If the school molt the children into positive discipline they will be a successful people. Many successful people attribute their success to discipline for them more than knowledge, communicate or skill, discipline played a crucial role in their way to success. More than this, Soft skills are enable children to succeed in the job market can first learned in school. For instance, Critical thinking and problem-solving, showing when children raising their hand answer questions and find the way to sole it, it reflect their self-esteem and confident in business.
In conclusion, independent individuals can come after when children have growing enough to be a good people and workers on daily basis. The perspective independent individuals easier rather than become good residents and workers.
- In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which of these two systems is more appropriate in today’s world? 84
- Some People think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 78
- Some People think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together Discuss both views and state your own opinion 86
- Topic: In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of Subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which of these two systems is more appropriate in today’s 61
- Many people believe that schools should teach Children to become good citizens and workers rather than independent individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31626506024 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80930135766 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4444222222 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263195634488 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878601590704 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684771839601 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179867541297 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751028319934 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.