Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is undoubted that scientific research plays an important role in human development. While some people think it is better for the government to take the responsibility of conducting and mastering them, I am personally convinced that to make continuous progress, it requires efforts from both the government and private companies.
On the one hand, the government has the obligation to take the charge of scientific research, because it is the administrator of the country. Scientific researches often require long-term efforts and large investments. Therefore, it is the government instead of private companies that has the power and resource to support them. Moreover, other supportive measures can also be taken by governments, such as giving additional welfare to researchers, thus attracting more talents and experts to participate in the projects.
On the other hand, there will also be advantages if private companies take a part. It is notable that some companies develop and sell their own products for their own profits, so there is a need for them to conduct some scientific researches. Pharmaceutical companies is a typical example -- it is hard for them to run and make profits without a private laboratory. If these companies are encouraged to conduct scientific researches according to their own needs, the market will certainly remain competitive and dynamic, which is both economically and scientifically beneficial.
In conclusion, for the sake of a long-term development, I think both the government and private companies should be involved in scientific researches. The resources and power of the government is the driving force, while the participation of private companies can keep the market competitive, thus promoting the progress.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206666666667 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.153333333333 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123333333333 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433333333333 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0533333333333 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103333333333 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0403226058552 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.24795109424 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116666666667 0.0861772015684 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0166666666667 0.021408717616 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00666666666667 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1764.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.48529411765 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.400735294118 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.363970588235 0.28420135186 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.275735294118 0.203846283523 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.242647058824 0.137316102897 177% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24795109424 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 51.0997020249 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6666666667 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.11316421 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 127.492653851 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 59.0637254902 49.1944974215 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.37333333333 1.69124875643 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254595394573 0.332605444948 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137933576192 0.102741220458 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.096349357341 0.0668466124924 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605566763774 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190682772148 0.148594505496 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123853677524 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363267235577 0.0742795772207 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.343027059523 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0887812197879 0.0638462369009 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188126056556 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238554428297 0.058150111329 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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