Scientific studies are considered one of the most vital fields that directly affect many important aspects of a country. It is said that governments should be in charge of leading and managing these studies rather than private firms. In my opinion, however, I disagree with this view since, with the support from private companies, a large amount of research that governments cannot afford would be carried out and this involvement could boost the competition among companies.
First of all, the financial investment from non-governmental organizations would probably be a great motivation for scientists to conduct more important and urgent studies. In the past few decades, the support from private firms has notably contributed to the sustainable development of society. For instance, during the Covid-19 pandemic, companies such as Prizer have strived for inventing a new vaccine against the disease in a short amount of time, which has outweighed the effort of governments and drastically helped to prevent the spread of the epidemic. Therefore, the participation of private organizations in scientific research can remarkably stimulate innovations and significantly benefit society.
Secondly, the fact that many companies engage in scientific research would profoundly encourage efficiency, diversity and competition among them. In order to compete with each other, companies might need to devote themselves more to improve not only the quantity but also the quality of each research they are caring out. For example, through competition, the two technology companies Apple and Samsung are continuously collecting data from various researches and surveys to strategize better consumer experiences. As a result, with these innovations in studies and productions, customers would have more diverse choices at much better prices and experiences.
In conclusion, while scientific research is supposed to be solely carried out and run by governments, the involvement of private organizations in the field would profoundly benefit customers in particular and society in general.
- The chart below shows the percentage of population aged 65 and over in three countries in 1980 2000 and predicted percentage in 2030 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site 61
- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73870967742 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12384172083 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2933023882 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.25 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291774407965 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965996887772 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738193246468 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175325938335 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951020926684 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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