The percentage of workers in agriculture manufacturing and services in 7 European countries in 2014

Essay topics:

The percentage of workers in agriculture, manufacturing and services in 7 European countries in 2014

The table below illustrates the proportion of people working in agriculture , manufacturing and services in 7 European countries in 2014, including UK, Czech Republic, Greece, Ukraine, France Romania and Germany.

Generally speaking, while people working in services sectors accounted for the biggest proportion, the figure varied significantly from 83.5% in UK to 43.9% in Romania.

The second largest group of employees worked in manufacturing sectors, ranging from 15.2% in UK to 37.4% in Czech Republic with a comparatively slight variation.

However, it is notable that Romania was the only countries where there are more people working in agriculture than in manufacturing, with a proportion of 28.2% and 27.9% respectively. When it comes to other countries, the percentage of agricultural workers provided the smallest part. The figure in Romania, as mentioned above, was relatively the highest, while in UK, Germany and France, the percentage were approximately the same, reaching 1.3%, 1.6%, 1.7% respectively.
In conclusion, most people in these countries dedicated themselves in services sector, while least people worked in agriculture.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...portion of people working in agriculture , manufacturing and services in 7 Europea...
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Line 8, column 88, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the least'.
Suggestion: while the least
...edicated themselves in services sector, while least people worked in agriculture.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'second', 'while', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302884615385 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.100961538462 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0721153846154 0.0759168565197 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0336538461538 0.0366838410393 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0144230769231 0.0131127313244 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163461538462 0.155750635184 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0480769230769 0.0379272487307 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.1915362061 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0144230769231 0.0210936926555 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0721153846154 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00961538461538 0.00967000014798 99% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1157.0 1161.00487805 100% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.9 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.76608187135 5.90752243213 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.456140350877 0.337110787985 135% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.374269005848 0.247514529752 151% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.286549707602 0.171178102325 167% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.198830409357 0.112407865282 177% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1915362061 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.546246751206 116% => OK
Word variations: 60.0637424158 49.3433353143 122% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.4285714286 23.0094962315 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0498187715 42.9750493124 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.285714286 135.714022679 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.0094962315 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 61.8554720134 47.7609492067 130% => OK
Elegance: 3.45161290323 2.94281807926 117% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.658973037428 0.418131533498 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.192550081744 0.181151798455 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645809652151 0.0850326197045 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.846370945554 0.706616315825 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185194980303 0.157042692854 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.35687973053 0.228904883108 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110728286943 0.108899403657 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290944511376 0.367819155151 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0550974737114 0.0812612215331 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420777102514 0.316326947829 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975215750938 0.0921553760075 106% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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