Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Undoubtedly, scientific research plays an important role in human development. While some people think it is better for the government to take the responsibility of conducting and mastering them, I am personally convinced that to make continuous progress, it requires efforts from both the government and private companies.
On the one hand, the government has the obligation to take the charge of scientific research, because it is the administrator of the country. Scientific researches often require long-term efforts and large investments. Therefore, it is the government instead of private companies that has the power and resource to offer a support. Moreover, other supportive measures can also be adopted by governments. For instance, they can offer additional welfare to researchers, thus attracting more talents and experts to participate in the projects.
On the other hand, there will also be advantages if private companies take a part in scientific researches. It is notable that some companies develop and sell their own products to gain profits, so there is a need for them to conduct some scientific researches privately. Pharmaceutical companies is a typical example -- it is hard for them to run and make profits without a private laboratory. If these companies are encouraged to conduct scientific researches according to their own needs, the market will certainly remain competitive and dynamic, which is both economically and scientifically beneficial.
In conclusion, for the sake of a long-term development, I think both the government and private companies should be involved in scientific researches. The resources and power of the government is the driving force, while the participation of private companies can keep the market competitive, thus promoting the progress.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213114754098 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.150819672131 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114754098361 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491803278689 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0459016393443 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0983606557377 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0295081967213 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.29657974521 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360655737705 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118032786885 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196721311475 0.021408717616 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00655737704918 0.011925033212 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1803.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 316.048096192 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.55636363636 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410909090909 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.378181818182 0.28420135186 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.290909090909 0.203846283523 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.254545454545 0.137316102897 185% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.29657974521 2.80594681477 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.56093040696 93% => OK
Word variations: 51.0009839569 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1538461538 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8713136883 49.517814964 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.692307692 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 58.972027972 49.1944974215 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.38666666667 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258927261145 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117291528698 0.102741220458 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112602101971 0.0668466124924 168% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565941142447 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.220298980407 0.148594505496 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119704010154 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372625534631 0.0742795772207 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350941581595 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742330026011 0.0638462369009 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191441927309 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172226902777 0.058150111329 30% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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