Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Face book) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
A few people generally opine that some social networking sites for example face book, have had adverse (detrimental, injurious, severe) effect on individuals as well as society. Many others believe advantages of such communicative sites outweigh its disadvantages. Although such sites have had damaging effects yet I personally believe that social networking sites are mainly beneficial to local communities.
Firstly, by availability of immense features in face book and other messengers these days, it has become possible to get rid of awkward feelings such as homesickness and loneliness for those, who leave their homes cities and countries for specific reasons. It seemed to be so hard to control emotional attachments after separating from family for majority of individuals a few years before.
Another supporting fact is that Communication through such sites is not only cheaper and convenient but also with availability of some advanced features as, video calling and social groups, people of all age groups stay connected with each other. By sharing current events through such amazing sites, all come to know about current happenings and important news of the day instantly without wasting time on watching mass media.
However, some negative effects on the communities of such communications cannot be denied. A number of illegal and unacceptable posts are often seen on face book which sometimes seriously hurt the faith and sentiments of a particular group of society. Furthermore, some innocent and new users on such sites are often betrayed by others because of lack of physical appearance while conversations.
At last, though some limitations in social networking sites exist, they have brought individuals close together. Local communities should try to control its misuse in order to promote its prominent advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52296819788 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95340415653 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650176678445 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6958383448 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297191819872 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10640986286 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886784394237 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151944111436 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121140270196 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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