In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that industries and commercial trades are being increasingly moved to rural regions by governments of few countries from developed cites. While I understand that critics may disapprove this idea because of lack of skilled labour and good infrastructure, I believe the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that moving commercial businesses into rural areas is not beneficial. Perhaps the main reason why people are in support of this argument is shortage of skilled workers in undeveloped areas, though such areas are very limited in this globalized world. Many people feel that population living in regional locations is comparatively less educated and untrained which can severely affect the productivity of a particular trade. Another key argument to favor this idea is that transportation and infrastructure is poor in regional areas. The result of this this that transportation cost of goods can be higher in comparison to cites which in turn might lead to less client arrivals in companies to purchase products
Despite the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that relocating commercial trades to rural areas is positive measure. The first key objective of shifting businesses from urban areas to is that there is more space availability at lower cost to set up factories and new companies. It is not only affordable all entrepreneurs, but also be helpful to utilise vacant places more effectively. Another possible advantage is that it provides a range of white-collar and blue-collar jobs for people in deprived areas. As a result of this people deprived of employment and finance get golden opportunity to uplift their status in society. Therefore, in my view, relocation of commercial trades to rural areas offers valuable benefits to the business owners as well as to the deprived people.
In conclusion, weighing up all the facts, it seems to me that we gain more than what we lose by relocating industrial and commercial establishments from urban areas to regionals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...s poor in regional areas. The result of this this that transportation cost of goods can b...
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Line 7, column 527, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...eople in deprived areas. As a result of this people deprived of employment and finan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33536585366 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06109099967 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5392083586 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.615384615 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187182555756 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633348666254 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350806227714 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109388902065 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451417616599 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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