Many people believe that zoo's have no purpose in Today's world and should be closed.
What problems do zoo's bring. What are the alternatives to zoo's if they are closed.
Wildlife is one predominant part of earth. Many of the species are kept in zoo's especially the endangered ones. There are plenty of zoo's all over the globe. Some folks claim that zoological gardens should be shut down as these are serving without purpose, however, I strongly criticise the fact as in my opinion, zoo's still have reasons to be open.
Firstly, authorities are doing no wrong as most of the zoological gardens are the prominent part of programmes to protect endangered specoes. They are taking Various steps to stop species from becoming extinct such as provoking species for reproduction. A zoological garden in America kept the California Condor (a type of bird) and forced them to reproduction, in result, the number of California Condor jumped to nearly 450 in 2016 from only 27 in 1987 and California Condor are now no longer considered as endangered species, For instance. Adding more, zoo's also provide better diet to the animals they keep.
Secondly, local and both international tourists pay good amount of currency to visit zoo's to take a look at species they might not see in future. Additionally, they can not go to forests to see wildlife animals but they are privileged to witness beautiful wild creatures in zoological gardens. Moreover, the money government earn through zoo's is a source to run programmes for endangered species.
On the other hand, animals in cage are controlled and they have lost their freedom, which might result in changed behaviour among them, additionally, the wildness of wild animals are fading away. Furthermore, moving away from zoo's, large parks can be a new alternative, where animals will not be in cage and they can enjoy their freedom.
To recapitulate, the positive outcomes of zoological gardens outweigh the negatives, so, in my perspective zoo's should not be shut down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ke a look at species they might not see in future. Additionally, they can not go to fores...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07565789474 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80086853059 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8336885658 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208462265888 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078805664172 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517371481802 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122398989971 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542151380918 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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