The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main

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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph and column chart reveals information about nation's export earnings and change in percentiles during 2015 to 2016 within several categories.

To began with, earnings of petroleum products were 61 billion dollars in 2015 which went up by 3% the following year and 64 billion dollars(approx) were earned in 2016. The business of 55 billion currency was done through exporting engineering products which was second highest during the period, however, maintaining its second spot, engineering goods jumped to the sale of 63 billion dollars nearly (slightly less than petroleum products), however, it showed increment of nearly three times more than petroleum products.

Gems and jewellery was the only category listed whose shares went down. In 2015, 43 billion dollars earned by exporting it while in the next year, it slumped to 41 billion dollar nearly by the loss of 5.18 percentile. Agricultural products earnings throght export changed barely with a margin of 0.81% only, reporting sales to 32 billion dollars to nearly 33 billion dollars within one year. Additionally, textiles industry expanded their business beautifully during the given period by showing the growth rate of 15.24 percentile, the figures from 26 billion dollars in 2015 skyrocketed to 32 billion dollars in 2016.

Overall, it is crystal clear that textiles steal the show by getting success in short span of time, meanwhile, petroleum industry was always the top earner.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, well, while, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36086956522 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63841405649 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7527846023 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.125 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19957758316 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974216571009 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598276648085 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133251627113 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075509093811 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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