Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people prefer to live alone. Because of the people’s living standard and the perception of people have changed to allow young people to live by themselves. Young people learn about being independent and can be able to enjoy the responsibilities from freedom of lifestyles. Despite all those benefits, there are drawbacks of difficulties in emergency cases and finance issues. In my perspective, even though the benefits for being independent and the responsibilities from freedom lifestyles, the disadvantages of emergency cases and the finance issues cannot outweigh.
The perception of people have changed significantly from conservative to democratic way. Previously, people were more focusing with the family-focused activities. The nuclear family structures and the big house structures can be seen as the example for this. However, the more people are open to changes and the availability of youth employment are enabling people to be financially stabled from young age. As a result of this, people can live alone by themselves.
There are several advantages of living alone. Among those, the common benefits would be the independent. People, especially youth, can be independent when they live alone, because all the decisions have to make by themselves. The consequences for such decision also are responsible by them. From this repetitive activity, people can be independent and can be able to make their own decision by foreseeing the consequence from this decision.
Not only the decision making is making them independent but people can enjoy their lifestyles from freedom. People are free from parent's nag and interruptions in their privacy. When people are living alone, they are more free with their decisions and behaviours. In other words, people can plan their day according to their own will without having to negotiate with other person (families) and those plans do not have to be interfered with family plans.
Despite all these gains, the health issues cannot outweigh its benefits. Whenever people get sick, there are no other person to take care of. When people get sick, people are easily feeling vulnerable and will be feeling loneliness. In the worst case, going to a hospital and cooking for the meal in fatigued conditions may be inevitable. About 25% of people died alone and have not been found for a month after death due to ignorance according to the UK statistics. Therefore, the more people live by themselves, the ignorant loneliness death will be increased.
Furthermore, people would suffer from financial issues since the joyful lifestyles would cost a lot of money. Since there will be no-one would nag to budget the money and the laziness in cooking will lead to spend the money, which will result in insufficient in balances. Since all the living expenses would be paid on top of entertainment expenses, the account budget should be managed but the freedom of lifestyles would be difficult to manage.
By comparing pros and cons of living alone, the drawbacks from it would be more outweigh than that of benefits. In my perspective, being independent and enjoy of freedom of lifestyles can be achieved in the later age, it does not have to be done at a young age. However, the provision of caring, loving and financial knowledge should be dealt at the early age, because the emplacement of those knowledge would be difficult in later ages. The earlier people receive the feeling of parents' love, care and financial information, the easier it would become a habit and which can lead to the stable lifestyles to be a member of society.
In conclusion, there are increasing number of people living alone. This can be due to the improvement of the economic status hiring youth employment and the people's perception to allow more people to live alone. Living alone would provide several benefits, learning about independent and enjoying the freedom lifestyles are habitual. In spite of those benefits, the emergency cases and financial issues are fatal to those people who are not ready. Thus, the drawbacks are outweighing its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'people', 'persons'?
Suggestion: people; persons
...ver people get sick, there are no other person to take care of. When people get sick, ...
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Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...e early age, because the emplacement of those knowledge would be difficult in later ages. The e...
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Line 8, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... status hiring youth employment and the peoples perception to allow more people to live...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in other words', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228802153432 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.158815612382 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0942126514132 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444145356662 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.028263795424 0.0437548338989 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115746971736 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0484522207268 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8483303581 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0349932705249 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.092866756393 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.043068640646 0.021408717616 201% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00942126514132 0.011925033212 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4101.0 1933.35771543 212% => OK
No of words: 664.0 316.048096192 210% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17620481928 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07623851424 4.20517956788 121% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253012048193 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19578313253 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156626506024 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8483303581 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.037074148 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405120481928 0.56093040696 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.9128739762 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0891783567 230% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 17.9459459459 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6966810671 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.837837838 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9459459459 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.351351351351 0.814263465372 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38877755511 182% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 43.2471507652 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.6976744186 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461347010015 0.332605444948 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130018768149 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0886319877089 0.0668466124924 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.52766304336 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137110154384 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171703987185 0.134430193775 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705806689992 0.0742795772207 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424008422643 0.324371583561 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0850077597324 0.0638462369009 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298057786969 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688667875102 0.058150111329 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.68436873747 207% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 5.90881763527 254% => OK
Negative topic words: 12.0 2.5751503006 466% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 32.0 10.4468937876 306% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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