Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards
of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings
more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?
In recent decades witnessed an increase in the proportion of foreign settlement,
raising many questions of safety and integration. Although the ideas of potential
drawbacks appear to be reasonable, I think living abroad will pay dividends.
On the one hand, there is a myriad of benefits when it comes to living abroad.
First, Residing in another nation is conducive to the liberty from the rigid laws
and social norms. For example, Homosexual individuals in Russia have a
propensity to move to other European countries because Homosexual intercourse
means capital punishment. Second, the Foreign residence is invariably associated
with higher opportunities of experiencing a more progressive and standardized
learning environment. This means would act as an incentive for their acquisition
of academic and empirical knowledge, promoting their career prospects with
better social status.
On the other hand, there are some potential problems pertaining to working or
living in a foreign environment. First, Individuals moving abroad themselves
could be highly sensitive to homesickness and nostalgia. This psychological
disorders would discourage their desire for integration, increasing the likelihood
of isolation from the locals outside. In addition, the foreign settlement could
culminate in the issues of cultural clash due to religious beliefs. For example,
Some Islamic refugees are susceptible to racial discrimination and even physical
battery due to the prejudice that Islamism is the cause of terrorism.
In conclusion, despite the ideas of safety and assimilation difficulties, the foreign
residence would offer a better living standard in terms of liberty and education
prospects.
- In spite of the advances made in agricultire many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 73
- Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path 74
- Some people think that the qualities a person needs to become successful in today s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people say that spending time to develop a successful career is the most important thing Others say that spending time with friends and family is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 68
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.984 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18587884264 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8473433546 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158065793255 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051427505101 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367197046764 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389453038769 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428813937153 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.4 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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