Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This they argue leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do to have a satisfying working life?
Human’s history includes a great deal of remarkable events in the past. Learning something from the old times and avoiding wrong decisions are favored habits for individuals. The world is changing rapidly and some of the old experiences are not suitable for today’s life; however, I strongly believe that history is very indispensable knowledge to realize people’s life, and not making the same mistake twice.
In a modern world, new methods are being advanced and applied to almost every aspects of our life. As the different ways of transportation method, such as planes, entering our life, overcoming long distances are now much faster, safer and comfortable compared to the past. In the ancient times, going from Europe to Northern America would take days-to-months ship trip while travellers could be attacked by the pirates and some serious contagious diseases, would be inevitable during the voyage. With the advent of airlines, this problem is now not an issue.
Clearly, this identifies that we cannot refer to the past’s feelings, nevertheless, we must not underestimate the power of history.
By looking at the history, we illustrates not only how much we took for granted but also we can truly learn a lesson from it. After the nuclear explosion occurred in Chernobyl, Ukraine in 1986 that affected millions of people, engineers and scientists were able to depict the fallacies within the nuclear core and this report helped us to alter the significant errors, even in the contemporary’s nuclear reactors and preventing new catastrophe happening again.
Furthermore, addressing the old knowledge help us to improve new technologies as it is the most appropriate thing done to play along with the improving world. Due to the Nicola Tesla’s works that were not appreciated in its time, Tesla Company by Elon Musk was able to establish Tesla automobiles which have autopilot preferences.
In conclusion, albeit the some of the past practices are useless in modern life, I fully support that the best way to evolve our Earth and dodge the mistakes is associate with the history.
- Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it This they argue leads to a more satisfying working life To what extent do you agree with this view What other things can people do to have a satisfying working life 89
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole What are advantages and disadvantages of this development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'illustrate'
Suggestion: illustrate
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21828908555 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88490145994 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5178615011 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.076923077 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232474280393 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737536615529 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563314901277 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106916479661 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709682145178 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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