Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?
Community security always a heated topic among the public. Although in many areas, security has been improved, there are still a number of people concern about their safety whether inside or outside their homes. This essay will delve into the causes and give some suggestion in the end.
First of all, many residents concern about their safety is mainly caused by the following aspects. To begin with, people are exposed to violent and sexual environment frequently. For instance, movies and television programme that glorify violence may confuse people’s realization of reality. This may lead them lack of truth to others, especially in the youth group. Secondly, people who living in some particular areas that crime rates are higher than other places will suffer more. That is because in such areas crimes like robbery or shoplifting are more likely occurred than other peaceful areas. Last but not least, lack of communication between neighbours is considered as the most important factor that caused the fear emotion. People are too busy to participate in the community activities and many people even do not realize who live in the next door. This result in the loss of community belonging and dependence among the public.
On the other hand, there are several strategies could be done in order to relieve folks’ emotion of fear. Firstly, governments should publish a new policy to limit the appearance of violent images to the public as well as enhance the police force against the crime. This will help to reduce the crime rates and create an increasingly safer community which people could enjoy the comfortable atmosphere and no longer to worry about safety. In terms of individuals, people should encourage themselves to participate in community activities more. The reason for this is that if people are surrounded by a familiar person, then they may feel safer compared to before even did not who is their neighbours.
In conclusion, this essay argued the possible reasons that may cause the fear of emotion among some people and some solutions could be taken. Governments and individuals should work together to create a safer community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19318181818 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61590656099 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6999284183 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2105263158 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169858629982 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483697627671 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495997034123 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100301714921 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384052931831 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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