Nowadays, universities are considered great opportunities to change people's lives. Although going to university is necessary, I suppose that vocational training should also be considered and spread.
There are two main reasons why more workers must be trained as skilled professionals. Firstly, electricians and plumbers are vital in constructing buildings and skyscrapers as they significantly contribute to the structure and function of the building. Such workers are vital when new buildings are constructed or existing buildings have to innovate or simply be maintained. In many countries, these buildings are mostly built or rented by schools, museums, and hospitals where many people gather, therefore, their safety depends on the quality of the building. Secondly, the overwhelm of academic graduates in some developed countries led to an unemployment situation even with those who have high degrees.
More people should be encouraged to enroll in vocational training courses. Corporations and employers need to emphasize the importance of realistic professional skills instead of appreciating applicants with too many degrees. This strategy would change the way people evaluate vocational training programs and boost their value to a higher level. At the same time, parents should also encourage their children to choose advocational training courses as a promising alternative to the university if their boys or girls are not suited to academic programs.
In conclusion, I agree that going to university is a good choice for after-graduate professionals. However, those who are suitable for vocational training courses should be encouraged and helped.
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...hough going to university is necessary, I suppose that vocational training should...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...to academic programs. In conclusion, I agree that going to university is a goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78861788618 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18108586659 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0780303996 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333711857905 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117031219952 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791756945078 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19862394071 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321402852098 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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