Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
There are indeed many people who prefer to watch foreign films rather than domestic productions. However, governments should promote locally produced films to generate more economic benefits.
There are various reasons why many people choose to watch international films instead of products in their own countries. Firstly, in some developed countries, filmmaking is promoted dramatically by investing huge budgets for actional scenes, advanced effects, and spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like Avengers are a typical example of such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Additionally, some huge-scale film projects have an advantage in negotiating with famous actors or actresses. Therefore, poor-quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries is disadvantageous.
In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there are always talented amateur filmmakers who only need to be given opportunities to prove themselves. If governments facilitate them, they could afford budgets for the salaries of film crews, accomplished actors or directors, and a number of other costs related to producing high-quality films. This could lead to some significant economic benefits, such as increased film sales and increased job opportunities.
In conclusion, I believe that increased financial subsidies could help to raise the quality of domestically produced films and allow them to compete with the foreign films that currently dominate the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08837209302 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21534988007 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693023255814 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7406698001 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471998956442 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159483185201 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147700451256 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292635055118 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143809900002 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.04 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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