Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
As the result of an increase in the number of university, the chance of having tertiary education is much more bigger, while the number of qulified manual workers is not enough to meet social demands. Personally, I completely agree that we should encourage more people to enroll in vocational trainning, eventhough university graduates is always neccesary for society.
To begin with, There are two primary reasons why following the vocational training is a worthy considering idea for highschool-leaver. Firstly, now that modernization process across the world, more new infastructures is being built which requires a huge number of blue collar workers such as electricians and plumbers. Therefore, finding a job would be easier to a manual worker compare with an graduated student in similar fields. Secondly, because the vocational training take less time than studying university, so it help people lessen the burden of finance. For example, in Viet Nam, It take people two years to master electrical skill compare to four year studying of electrical graduates. The more time you spend on studying, the more tuition fee you have to pay for education
On the other hand, the source of experts graduating from universities is always necessary for the development of country. In many particular field required mind-set and massive knowledges, a worker should be educated carefully in the long term to meet qulification needs. For instance, if a medicial graduate is not taught in-dept about human body by professionals. they would lack basic knowledge and cause detrimental health effects to the patients.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both vocational training and academic study in universities are worth taking into account for high school graduates thanks to aforementioned benefits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...ce of having tertiary education is much more bigger, while the number of qulified manual wo...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...why following the vocational training is a worthy considering idea for highschoo...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tional training is a worthy considering idea for highschool-leaver. Now that mod...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... modernization process across the world, more new infastructures is being built w...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... easier to a manual worker compare with an graduated student in similar fields. Se...
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Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...rsity to become an electrical engineer. the more time you spend on studying, the mo...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r. This results in the unemployments of a large number of people who attended vocational training...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32907348243 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03239492135 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632587859425 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9909857071 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266158837239 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890975292948 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498217126638 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154521701409 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250789251779 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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