Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.

What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

“Take care of your body, as it is the only place to live in.” Hence, people should concern about their health and the type of food they are eating. As the world is developing, with all kinds of facilities that are available people are getting lazier. Nowadays, people prefer junk food over vegetables and fruits, and it is convenient to grab a burger from a drive away than to prepare a nutritious snack.

The most challenging part of maintaining a healthy lifestyle is a lack of knowledge. People assume that they have to spend thousands of money to eat good food, and they think it is only possible to get proteins through expensive powders. However, it is all a myth. A reasonable substitute food is always available, such as, eggs, which are an excellent source of protein.

There are very few restaurants that serve healthy food, which is friendly with one’s pocket. Nowadays, folks do not have time to cook their meals. After a long working hour, everyone wants to spend their time with family and not struggling in the kitchen. In such a scenario, ordering food online is more comfortable. To combat such a scenario, fresh and healthy, ready to eat foods are available in the market. The other possible solution is to cook multiple meals during free hours and refrigerate it.

Healthy food is not tasty is one of the dilemmas that prevails in almost everybody mind. For many people, it is a ritual to eat junk food like burgers, pizza, and coke during parties and house gatherings. We must abolish such traditions.

In brief, one must practice healthy eating habits to stay fit. A good health results in better concentration and performance at work.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, in brief, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90592334495 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62116799859 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9338748456 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891875772628 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266245490793 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281288381414 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496266843984 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185335779251 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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